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PostSubject: Comments on the users' writing   Sun Feb 17, 2008 1:10 am

Any and all feedback you have on my stories can be posted on this thread. Be merciful. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the users' writing   Sun Feb 17, 2008 1:20 am

Well I love your style and I want you to write longer stories so I can enjoy reading them Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the users' writing   Sun Feb 17, 2008 1:46 am

I loved "Trapped" just as much as the other one. It reaminds me of my favourite genre - fantastic literature - characterized by events with no explanations. Tsvetlan Todorov (a critic of fantastic literature) said that if the reader finds a logical explanation, then it becomes surnatural. If the explanation is mythical or religious, the story becomes mystic. The hesitation between these two creates the fantastic ^^

Looking forward to the next one!

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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the users' writing   Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:03 pm

i have yet to read your short stories, but i damn sure will soon! Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the users' writing   Fri Dec 12, 2008 2:38 pm

nice ones!! That's what i need to pass the time at work :D
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the users' writing   Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:02 am

( same problem as always with your writing... not enough of it, but perhaps i am just greedy and prejudiced) a good read!!
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the users' writing   Thu Apr 09, 2009 12:11 am

there are 9 more pages to translate Wink and thank you!

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